Now that I am half way through Little Woman, I've come to the conclusion that it would never have a market in this modern day.
As a writer, I've been through the query process many times, and the biggest criticism I have gotten on my work is that I start off too slow. You need a good hook in the first page/paragraph/sentence/half sentence that will propel the prospective reader in a hurtling death race to the final page. If you can make it dystopian, dark, gritty, oversexed, and maybe a teeny tiny bit about demons or dark magic then all the better. A book about a random period of time with the major driving plot point being that the father is off to war and sick just wouldn't cut it these days. I mean, let's face it, nothing major happens. It's a book about relationships and a slice of life. You'd pretty much only find a probable audience for the novel in the Christian Fiction market.
These days it doesn't matter how well written it is, and don't get me wrong I believe Little Women to be one of the best written books of all time, if it doesn't fit a certain formula it isn't going to be picked up. Honestly, if you put Hunger Games and Little Women up against each other vying for an agent's pickup which do you think would get picked? Exactly. And it's a tragedy. Certainly they are each in a different genre, but it's a shame that there is nothing modern to compare it to. There's the odd straight "fiction" novel that breaks onto the public consciousness like Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close, Life of Pi, or The Help, but nothing that endures like these past few books and I wonder why that is. The classics have a completely different feel than anything modern. Whether we bring that to the reading because they are designated as classics would make for an interesting discussion to have, but for now, and for decades, nothing our species has written has endured for long at all. Maybe we can't tell during our time in the same way people didn't know that they were in the Renaissance while it was happening.
My personal opinion, however, is that this work simply glows from scene to scene. I've mentioned before about how the magic of these novels is in their reality, that this is really how people are and have all the hallmarks of having actually happened. The newspaper, along with their little alter egos, and post office adventures are extremely endearing.
It reminds me of the sorts of things my own children come up with when they are "dying" of boredom. Lately when they say, "I'm bored!", I respond with a hearty, "Congratulations!". After a minute of the confused look on their faces they ask why I'm congratulating them. "Because, that means that you're on the edge of making up some great game, or might end up acting out a play of a story, or you'll get an amazing idea that you wouldn't have if you'd been on devices or watching TV. We should get you bored more often". That usually gets me an eye roll, an aggravated sigh, and fists on hips, but within ten minutes they usually prove me right.
My daughter chose Little Women (abridged version) as her book report book a few weeks ago. Probably the biggest reaction she showed (other than "Wow, Papa, Amy is just downright mean") was the experiment of the girls to try and do nothing, to have a little holiday. Ever since reading about that, and especially Beth's unfortunate casualty, she has endeavored to work a little harder even on the days she has free of chores. Appropriately it has affected me in quite similar ways in the care and keeping of our home.
"Have regular hours for work and play, make each day both useful and pleasant, and prove that you understand the worth of time by employing it well. Then youth will be delightful, old age will bring few regrets, and life become a beautiful success, in spite of poverty."
Try telling that to kids, let alone adults, these days and you'll get a response akin to, "Don't you tell me how to live my life. You don't know me!".
In my daughter's homeschool materials I was delighted to find that at the top of her arithmetic pages and her spelling pages there are verses and maxims for her to read. It used to be fairly standard in schools to have these "copybook headings". We've become a culture that is obsessed with burning down the previous standards. "If it's old it's bad," is something I've heard and even out of my own daughter's mouth. It is an extremely human tendency to throw the baby out with the bathwater. It is a far easier thing to look at edifices and institutions of the past and say "burn it" than go through the hard work off picking over what is worth saving and taking with us. As a species we always do what is easiest and most emotionally satisfying rather than what is actually best for us. The older I get, the farther I look back and the more fastidious I am about sorting through the burnt wreckage for gems.
"Camp Laurence" was a delight. I love it when I'm nostalgic for an era that I've never even been a part of. Certainly I'm guilty of romanticizing the past and would find things to complain about if I were transported across space and time, but I do so love it, regardless.
Also, I love that Jo and I share the same birth month. I do look at November far more pleasantly as a month because I was born on the first day of it.
Then the darkness comes...father is sick, Mother must leave, and then, while gone, Beth becomes sick. Even though I knew it was coming, Beth getting sick was a blow. I would write more except that I apparently don't like to talk about it. Because of this, the return of Mr. March is incredibly bittersweet. I do delight in Jo's quiet fury regarding the possibility that Meg and Mr. Brooke may get together. There is something so honest, so genuine, about that emotion and how it plays out.
My great hope is that I'll be able to purposefully carve out more time for the novel. I do have quite an affection for it. It may even become one of those novels I dig out every year to remind myself there are encouraging and wondrous things in this world when it gets dark.
Of course October is the month that I read the Ray Bradbury novel Something Wicked This Way Comes to my daughter. If you are looking for a good book for the prelude to Halloween it is very much worth your time, as is all Bradbury content.
Pax,
W
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Saturday, September 19, 2015
Sunday, March 8, 2015
Bigotry and Mob Mentality (To Kill A Mockingbird Ch. 11-18)
Finally I get a moment where I'm not cleaning up or dealing with the mucus of my children. Yes, the house of Plague and Woe is on the decline. My children are happier, my wife has returned from her self imposed exile, and while they are out enjoying the day I can at long last make a post.
Last time we covered all of the southernisms from Scuppernongs to Lane cake. Today we get into the meat of the book where everything shifts away from idyllic (aside from school and forgetful pre-teen fiance's) childhood to real world grown up problems. The problems have been there lurking in the dark and making themselves known about as much as Boo Radley. The hard shift comes pretty quickly.
At the start of this second third of the book we are introduced to Mrs. Dubose who appears initially as a terrible woman. Scout tries to say "hey" and is accused of being an ugly girl and how dare she say "hey" when she should be saying "good afternoon". We've all known and disliked someone like Mrs. Dubose. Nothing is ever good enough, their beliefs and understandings are from two or three generations ago enough to be alien or anathema entirely to our own conceptions, and they feel it is their duty to tell everyone how best to live. They seem angry at the world for changing at all. I've disregarded them numerous times before as just old people who are just mean, crazy, or both. When Jem gets furious at her Atticus reminds me "Easy does it, son...She's an old lady and she's ill. You just hold your head high and be a gentleman. Whatever she says to you, it's your job not to let her make you mad." Advice I wish I would have taken on a number of occasions.
Jem has a fit at Mrs. Dubose insulting his father and thrashes the her flowers to bits. He's punished for this by having to go read to her for an hour or two every day. During this time Scout and Jem notice that she goes into these queer little fits, and they suspect that she keeps adding time to their reading making it even longer. Within the past few years I've become well acquainted with the maxim "Be kind because everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle". It is very easy to simplify everyone's behaviors into "they're just dumb" or "they're just mean" and caring very very little for that third dimension. There's always another dimension to people. Everyone has a secret struggle or a secret pain that informs their behavior. We all have them and we tend to act like other people shouldn't.
My greatest struggle tends to be with self doubt. Any time someone gives me a compliment I deflect it a bit with humor because if it actually gets to me core I start examining every word of what they are saying, the thirty possible meanings, then I try to gauge the sincerity based on how related to me they are because the closer you are the more likely you are to say it just to not hurt my feelings, and the final stage is how accurate your perception of me may or may not be...ARG! It's all automatic. And why? Cause of a wound left over from my childhood. When others react to pain from their childhood I tend to come across as "Ugh..please, get over it" ignoring their third dimension.
When Mrs. Dubose dies and all is revealed about her addiction to morphine and the fact that she was trying to die free of it then Jem becomes sensitive to that third dimension. Sometimes I wonder if we humans are even capable of being sensitive to that third dimension without knowledge. Maybe that's what being kind and being a gentleman is all about...allowing for another's pain, grief, and to be treated humanely without knowledge of exactly why we should.
I loved the point at which Jem turns twelve and he becomes "difficult to live with". Scout simplifies the situation with her best guess of, "All he needs is somebody to beat him up and I ain't big enough." Summer comes and Dill, Scouts only hope and solace, doesn't end up joining them because he has a new dad. Scout, of course is distraught. ...without him, life was unbearable. I stayed miserable for two whole days." If only Bella from Twilight had the same temperament. It would have been a totally different book.
With Atticus out of town and no Sunday school teacher for the kids at the "white church" Calpurnia takes them to her church. Here is what I am beginning to understand about the great books so far: the "evil" or the "bad" is not exclusive to one side or the other. Each side, blacks and whites, has bigots. When Lula gets all pissed off at Calpurnia for bringing them I was happy to see the balanced approach. The first time I ever realized there was a difference between black and white was because of someone much like Lula. I didn't learn about racism from a white bigot and that has influenced my view ever since. Hatred and bigotry aren't exclusive to any color or gender, though people may wish it was otherwise.
I was delighted to have a small peek into the southern black church culture as a whole. I loved that the song leader was the city garbage man, something real about that, and I felt a bit of wonder reading about "linin'". Other cultures, even within the borders of the US, fascinate me quite a bit. You don't have to go very far to have your paradigms challenged.
After that experience, in comes Aunt Alexandra to live with them. Good...Lord.
"How'd you like for her to come live with us?"
"I said I would like it very much, which was a lie, but one must lie under certain circumstances and at all times when one can't do anything about them."
Everything about them starts to change, including how Atticus relates to them. One night he tries to relate about how their Aunt wants them to understand that they "aren't from run-of-the-mill people, that you are the product of several generations' gentle breeding..."There's this quiet, understated moment when Atticus realizes what's come over him, that he doesn't talk to his children that way and he drops the subject telling them to forget about it completely. It's a moment of real strength for a father let alone a single father. I often complain that I'm not the father I want to be and berate myself. My wife tells me, among other things, no body ever is the parent they think they should be, but I recognize when I've done something wrong, ask forgiveness of my children, and attempt change. This quiet moment seems replete with that kind of strength.
After Dill is discovered, having run away from his mom and new dad, the book takes the hard shift to focusing on the trial. I love the moment when Scout unknowingly "shames" Mr. Cunningham. (an aside: all three of these novels have had something to do with an entail. weird.) Atticus' observation that sometimes mobs need to be reminded they are made up of men was spot on. Nothing scares me more than mob mentality. The psychology of it is truly frightening when you research it. We forget who we are and can immediately justify all sorts of terrible things as a part of a mob. There's no logic, just emotion.
It's easy to see where the case is headed, possibly because I've seen too many legal thrillers, and where the holes are. I suspect the case won't go as Atticus wishes it would. Often, to a man of principle, it doesn't actually matter if the rest of the world agrees or if they succeed.
I'm really fascinated to see how this book ends, and to see Boo Radley finally come out, which I assume he does. I'm very close to the end so, only a few more days are left of this book and then it's on to Wuthering Heights by that other Bronte sister, Emily. That is unless I decide to read the whole Bible again. ;)
Pax,
W
Last time we covered all of the southernisms from Scuppernongs to Lane cake. Today we get into the meat of the book where everything shifts away from idyllic (aside from school and forgetful pre-teen fiance's) childhood to real world grown up problems. The problems have been there lurking in the dark and making themselves known about as much as Boo Radley. The hard shift comes pretty quickly.
At the start of this second third of the book we are introduced to Mrs. Dubose who appears initially as a terrible woman. Scout tries to say "hey" and is accused of being an ugly girl and how dare she say "hey" when she should be saying "good afternoon". We've all known and disliked someone like Mrs. Dubose. Nothing is ever good enough, their beliefs and understandings are from two or three generations ago enough to be alien or anathema entirely to our own conceptions, and they feel it is their duty to tell everyone how best to live. They seem angry at the world for changing at all. I've disregarded them numerous times before as just old people who are just mean, crazy, or both. When Jem gets furious at her Atticus reminds me "Easy does it, son...She's an old lady and she's ill. You just hold your head high and be a gentleman. Whatever she says to you, it's your job not to let her make you mad." Advice I wish I would have taken on a number of occasions.
Jem has a fit at Mrs. Dubose insulting his father and thrashes the her flowers to bits. He's punished for this by having to go read to her for an hour or two every day. During this time Scout and Jem notice that she goes into these queer little fits, and they suspect that she keeps adding time to their reading making it even longer. Within the past few years I've become well acquainted with the maxim "Be kind because everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle". It is very easy to simplify everyone's behaviors into "they're just dumb" or "they're just mean" and caring very very little for that third dimension. There's always another dimension to people. Everyone has a secret struggle or a secret pain that informs their behavior. We all have them and we tend to act like other people shouldn't.
My greatest struggle tends to be with self doubt. Any time someone gives me a compliment I deflect it a bit with humor because if it actually gets to me core I start examining every word of what they are saying, the thirty possible meanings, then I try to gauge the sincerity based on how related to me they are because the closer you are the more likely you are to say it just to not hurt my feelings, and the final stage is how accurate your perception of me may or may not be...ARG! It's all automatic. And why? Cause of a wound left over from my childhood. When others react to pain from their childhood I tend to come across as "Ugh..please, get over it" ignoring their third dimension.
When Mrs. Dubose dies and all is revealed about her addiction to morphine and the fact that she was trying to die free of it then Jem becomes sensitive to that third dimension. Sometimes I wonder if we humans are even capable of being sensitive to that third dimension without knowledge. Maybe that's what being kind and being a gentleman is all about...allowing for another's pain, grief, and to be treated humanely without knowledge of exactly why we should.
I loved the point at which Jem turns twelve and he becomes "difficult to live with". Scout simplifies the situation with her best guess of, "All he needs is somebody to beat him up and I ain't big enough." Summer comes and Dill, Scouts only hope and solace, doesn't end up joining them because he has a new dad. Scout, of course is distraught. ...without him, life was unbearable. I stayed miserable for two whole days." If only Bella from Twilight had the same temperament. It would have been a totally different book.
With Atticus out of town and no Sunday school teacher for the kids at the "white church" Calpurnia takes them to her church. Here is what I am beginning to understand about the great books so far: the "evil" or the "bad" is not exclusive to one side or the other. Each side, blacks and whites, has bigots. When Lula gets all pissed off at Calpurnia for bringing them I was happy to see the balanced approach. The first time I ever realized there was a difference between black and white was because of someone much like Lula. I didn't learn about racism from a white bigot and that has influenced my view ever since. Hatred and bigotry aren't exclusive to any color or gender, though people may wish it was otherwise.
I was delighted to have a small peek into the southern black church culture as a whole. I loved that the song leader was the city garbage man, something real about that, and I felt a bit of wonder reading about "linin'". Other cultures, even within the borders of the US, fascinate me quite a bit. You don't have to go very far to have your paradigms challenged.
After that experience, in comes Aunt Alexandra to live with them. Good...Lord.
"How'd you like for her to come live with us?"
"I said I would like it very much, which was a lie, but one must lie under certain circumstances and at all times when one can't do anything about them."
Everything about them starts to change, including how Atticus relates to them. One night he tries to relate about how their Aunt wants them to understand that they "aren't from run-of-the-mill people, that you are the product of several generations' gentle breeding..."There's this quiet, understated moment when Atticus realizes what's come over him, that he doesn't talk to his children that way and he drops the subject telling them to forget about it completely. It's a moment of real strength for a father let alone a single father. I often complain that I'm not the father I want to be and berate myself. My wife tells me, among other things, no body ever is the parent they think they should be, but I recognize when I've done something wrong, ask forgiveness of my children, and attempt change. This quiet moment seems replete with that kind of strength.
After Dill is discovered, having run away from his mom and new dad, the book takes the hard shift to focusing on the trial. I love the moment when Scout unknowingly "shames" Mr. Cunningham. (an aside: all three of these novels have had something to do with an entail. weird.) Atticus' observation that sometimes mobs need to be reminded they are made up of men was spot on. Nothing scares me more than mob mentality. The psychology of it is truly frightening when you research it. We forget who we are and can immediately justify all sorts of terrible things as a part of a mob. There's no logic, just emotion.
It's easy to see where the case is headed, possibly because I've seen too many legal thrillers, and where the holes are. I suspect the case won't go as Atticus wishes it would. Often, to a man of principle, it doesn't actually matter if the rest of the world agrees or if they succeed.
I'm really fascinated to see how this book ends, and to see Boo Radley finally come out, which I assume he does. I'm very close to the end so, only a few more days are left of this book and then it's on to Wuthering Heights by that other Bronte sister, Emily. That is unless I decide to read the whole Bible again. ;)
Pax,
W
Friday, March 6, 2015
Appalachian American Alliteration
I apologize, dear reader, for not having made more frequent updates as of late. The sad story, and it is a tale of woe, is that a week ago my son got sick, then my daughter got sick, and then I, being a stay at home dad, was pretty much doomed to get sick. My wife, a CPA hip deep into tax season, chose to abandon us for the relatively sanitary conditions of her Sister's house. Today is pretty much the first time I've been able to string sentences together in a manner recognizable as language.
Fortunately I was able to recognize words and sentences while being subjected to the plague, and so I've nearly read to the end of To Kill a Mockingbird. I'll be posting my thoughts on the second third another time, but today I have another reason for posting.
As I've mentioned, I am a huge fan of "Appalachian American" culture and language. It really does need its own specification because it is so very different from anything you'll experience anywhere else. Yes, we speak the same "language" and all embrace the general American culture. It can, however, be as different from Alaska to Georgia as it is from the U.S.A. to England. There are roots and the same language but so very different. Sometimes it can be different words for the same thing, as in an elevator in the U.S. and a lift in England, or distinct local oddities.
Rabbit Tobacco: When scout describes the condition of the Radley yard she mentions that Johnson Grass and Rabbit Tobacco grew in abundance there. Johnson Grass is a common enough around the nation and is actually native to the Mediterranean area. It's apparently very good at protecting against soil erosion. Rabbit Tobacco, though, I had never heard of before. Pseudognaphalium obtusifolium, is its scientific designation if that sort of thing matters to you. It also goes by the names "old field balsam" and "sweet everlasting." When it is crushed it gives of the scent of maple. The Native Americans of all tribes found a ton of different uses for it; everything from muscle cramps, asthma (when smoked), rheumatism, cold syrup, mumps, fevers, headaches, to dispelling ghosts and bringing back those who had "lost their mind". From what I've read it was actually common for children in the south to smoke the leaves to mimic adults smoking actual tobacco.
Smilax: When Mr. Cunningham pays Atticus however he can, for Christmas he dropped off a crate of "smilax and holly". While it may have been just for the purpose of Christmas decoration, the root of the smilax is predominantly used in sarsaparilla and other root beers.
Croker Sack: Essentially a burlap sack or it could mean any sack made of a coarse material. The colorful name comes from it being the kind of sack used to hold frogs when hunting them.
Hain't: This was a hard one to find. In the book Walter Cunningham, walking past the Radley place with Jem and Scout, declared that there was a "hain't" that lived in the decrepit house. Most places online simply say it's a contraction of the word "hasn't" and "ain't". The only things I could find other than this were odd mentions that it means a ghost or spirit. In one place a sermon referred to the Holy Spirit as the "Holy Haint". Of course, the context lends credence to the paranormal definition. I quite like the word "hain't". It feeds into my brain regarding the nature or supernatural creatures, that they are things that shouldn't be but yet are.
Crackling Bread: Because Calpurnia go "so lonesome" with both kids away from school she made Crackling Bread. This is something on my list of regional foods to try. From what I could gather, it's cornbread made with pork rinds in it. I can't stand a pork rind by itself (fried pork skin...just doesn't sound appealing) but put it in cornbread and something in the pleasure center of my brain says, "Oh, that could be nummy."
Scuppernongs: The state fruit of North Carolina, Scuppernongs are similar to your average white grape but are larger and more round. The name is due to where they were first found, the Scuppernong River in North Carolina. Also in North Carolina is the oldest cultivated grape vine known to man. It's the 400 year old "Mother Vine" on Roanoke Island.
Lane Cake: Miss Maudie makes up a Lane Cake for Mr. Avery who helped fight the fire. I've made a few cakes in my time and have looked over many descriptions of recipes (mostly because I'm trying to find one that I had once when I was 5 years old that I still crave but haven't found its equal) and this is the first time I've heard one described as "bourbon-laden". There's a heck of a lot of bourbon in this baby...hoo wee. How much you ask? 3 cups of bourbon for one cake. DANG. Other than that there are raisins, pecans, coconut, and other variations.
Scout mentions that Miss Maudie made a Lane cake to welcome Aunt Alexandra "with so much shinny in that it made me tight."
Shinny: Liquor.
Habiliments: Clothing. Yeah...I was a bit disappointed to. I suppose the level of the word was increased to make it worth of Sunday dress.
Rotogravure: A process of mass production printing used at the time for magazines, art prints, and the like.
There were a few more colorful words and phrases that caught my eye, but I forgot to mark them in my copy because I was getting caught up in the story. After the showdown at the jail, I was burning through the book and can't wait to write some more about how truly wonderful it is. For now, though, I've got some cold medicine and a nap calling my name.
Pax,
W
Fortunately I was able to recognize words and sentences while being subjected to the plague, and so I've nearly read to the end of To Kill a Mockingbird. I'll be posting my thoughts on the second third another time, but today I have another reason for posting.
As I've mentioned, I am a huge fan of "Appalachian American" culture and language. It really does need its own specification because it is so very different from anything you'll experience anywhere else. Yes, we speak the same "language" and all embrace the general American culture. It can, however, be as different from Alaska to Georgia as it is from the U.S.A. to England. There are roots and the same language but so very different. Sometimes it can be different words for the same thing, as in an elevator in the U.S. and a lift in England, or distinct local oddities.
Rabbit Tobacco: When scout describes the condition of the Radley yard she mentions that Johnson Grass and Rabbit Tobacco grew in abundance there. Johnson Grass is a common enough around the nation and is actually native to the Mediterranean area. It's apparently very good at protecting against soil erosion. Rabbit Tobacco, though, I had never heard of before. Pseudognaphalium obtusifolium, is its scientific designation if that sort of thing matters to you. It also goes by the names "old field balsam" and "sweet everlasting." When it is crushed it gives of the scent of maple. The Native Americans of all tribes found a ton of different uses for it; everything from muscle cramps, asthma (when smoked), rheumatism, cold syrup, mumps, fevers, headaches, to dispelling ghosts and bringing back those who had "lost their mind". From what I've read it was actually common for children in the south to smoke the leaves to mimic adults smoking actual tobacco.
Smilax: When Mr. Cunningham pays Atticus however he can, for Christmas he dropped off a crate of "smilax and holly". While it may have been just for the purpose of Christmas decoration, the root of the smilax is predominantly used in sarsaparilla and other root beers.
Croker Sack: Essentially a burlap sack or it could mean any sack made of a coarse material. The colorful name comes from it being the kind of sack used to hold frogs when hunting them.
Hain't: This was a hard one to find. In the book Walter Cunningham, walking past the Radley place with Jem and Scout, declared that there was a "hain't" that lived in the decrepit house. Most places online simply say it's a contraction of the word "hasn't" and "ain't". The only things I could find other than this were odd mentions that it means a ghost or spirit. In one place a sermon referred to the Holy Spirit as the "Holy Haint". Of course, the context lends credence to the paranormal definition. I quite like the word "hain't". It feeds into my brain regarding the nature or supernatural creatures, that they are things that shouldn't be but yet are.
Crackling Bread: Because Calpurnia go "so lonesome" with both kids away from school she made Crackling Bread. This is something on my list of regional foods to try. From what I could gather, it's cornbread made with pork rinds in it. I can't stand a pork rind by itself (fried pork skin...just doesn't sound appealing) but put it in cornbread and something in the pleasure center of my brain says, "Oh, that could be nummy."
Scuppernongs: The state fruit of North Carolina, Scuppernongs are similar to your average white grape but are larger and more round. The name is due to where they were first found, the Scuppernong River in North Carolina. Also in North Carolina is the oldest cultivated grape vine known to man. It's the 400 year old "Mother Vine" on Roanoke Island.
Lane Cake: Miss Maudie makes up a Lane Cake for Mr. Avery who helped fight the fire. I've made a few cakes in my time and have looked over many descriptions of recipes (mostly because I'm trying to find one that I had once when I was 5 years old that I still crave but haven't found its equal) and this is the first time I've heard one described as "bourbon-laden". There's a heck of a lot of bourbon in this baby...hoo wee. How much you ask? 3 cups of bourbon for one cake. DANG. Other than that there are raisins, pecans, coconut, and other variations.
Scout mentions that Miss Maudie made a Lane cake to welcome Aunt Alexandra "with so much shinny in that it made me tight."
Shinny: Liquor.
Habiliments: Clothing. Yeah...I was a bit disappointed to. I suppose the level of the word was increased to make it worth of Sunday dress.
Rotogravure: A process of mass production printing used at the time for magazines, art prints, and the like.
There were a few more colorful words and phrases that caught my eye, but I forgot to mark them in my copy because I was getting caught up in the story. After the showdown at the jail, I was burning through the book and can't wait to write some more about how truly wonderful it is. For now, though, I've got some cold medicine and a nap calling my name.
Pax,
W
Wednesday, February 25, 2015
A Boy Named Boo (To Kill a Mockingbird Ch. 1- 10)
The initial thing that occurs to me is that so far, 3 out of 3, these novels have sucked me in pretty quickly. Oddly enough it isn't for the reason that modern "writing experts" proclaim. I've read enough issues of Writer's Digest to know that the single most important thing to hook a reader is an exciting first sentence. Even the first word has to grab the reader, the first paragraph, the first chapter all has to be perfectly tuned to grip the reader by the throat and throw them into the rest of your novel. It's perplexing to me, in a sort of round about way, that so many classics don't sink their hooks in you from the beginning.
"Call me Ishmael."
"It is a truth universally acknowledged that..."
"When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow."
It doesn't exactly create the sense of "Wait, WHAT? I have to read more!" that all of my writing teachers in college demanded of me. I guess I'm in good company because in my writing I won't force a "perfect hook" first sentence. I'll usually get you by the end of the first chapter though, and that's what these classics have been very good at.
To Kill a Mockingbird takes place in the sleepy little town of Mayberry...sorry, I mean Maycomb. Honestly it may as well be Mayberry it's so delightfully small and idyllic in a retro fashion.
Harper Lee supports her setting with such appropriate usages of language and anecdotes that even my mental reading voice is using a southern drawl. It's so pitch perfect that you don't for a moment question that this town exists nor that it is Ms. Lee's actual experience. One of my favorite things about going back east to visit my relatives in West Virginia is because of language. In fact it is where I first discovered just how delighted I could be by language.
I often relate the story of a time when we visited my Grandaddy and Granny one year. Often the menfolk and womenfolk would separate to talk about things. I was mostly raised by my mother, because my father was in the military and I was homeschooled for a good half of my "learnin'" years, and as such when the separation of the group along gender lines occurred I often hung back with my mother. This allowed me to be privy to all of the good gossip and cooking tips, the later of which set a part of the course for my life.
One year, however, I realized that at some point I had "grown up". I was told, not invited - told, by my father that I was to join the menfolk out on the patio. It was my dad, grandaddy, my crazy uncle Gary, and myself sitting out on the plastic patio furniture on plastic covered cushions. There was an awkward pause as everyone kind of settled in and searched for something to talk about.
Now, talking in the south is not like talking in most places. It's almost a leisure sport. One person, usually the eldest, begins the cycle.
"Went down to the Kroger the other day and got a watermelon they had on special (pronounced spay-shoo) for 99 cents a pound," my grandaddy started it off.
"99 cents a pound?" everyone took a turn saying.
"Yeah. Pretty good for 99 cents a pound," he responded.
The conversation takes another turn towards a secondary topic. A few sentences are said on another topic and then there's another pause before the first topic is folded back into the mix.
"99 cents a pound. Man. I can't imagine it was all that good for 99 cents a pound," my uncle would declare.
"Yeah. Yeah, it was pretty good," Grandaddy reassured.
"And you said you got it on special down at the Kroger?"
"Yeah. 99 cents a pound on special."
A third topic is then brought up, The second topic is then revisited followed by the first.
"Well, I better get on down to the Kroger later to get me some of that watermelon. 99 cents a pound?"
"Yeah, on special. 99 cents a pound. I got it at the Kroger over on that corner down there, but I expect they've got the sale anywhere."
It goes on from there, topic after topic folding back in on themselves til the end of time if you let them, I'm sure. Discovering this delighted me, and now when I'm around groups of people I pay attention to what they are saying it, how they are relating and so on. It delights me to see how these little "conversation fractals work out. Harper Lee's conversations are amazing to watch, from stories about the county's colorful past to Scout's conversations/conflicts with the big city trained teacher.
These stories and word choices give the whole thing an authenticity that can't be fabricated.
"...but they were Haverfords, in Maycomb County a name synonymous with jackass. The Haverfords ahd dispatched Maycomb's leading blacksmith in a misunderstanding arising from the alleged wrongful detention of a mare, were imprudent enough to do it in the presence of three witnesses, and insisted that the son-of-a-bitch-had-it-coming-to-him was a good enough defense for anybody."
Her description of Maycomb is nearly poetry for someone like me,
"Somehow it was hotter then: a black dog suffered on a summer's day; bony mules hitched to Hoover carts flicked flies in the sweltering shad of the live oaks on the square. Men's stiff collars wilted by nine in the morning. Ladies bathed before noon, after their three-o'clock naps, and by nightfall were like soft teacakes with frostings of sweat and sweet talcum."
Talk about some great writing. It evokes a similar mood and poetry as Ray Bradbury in Something Wicked This Way Comes, which is one of the few books I regard highly enough to read every year.
The Radley place is introduced as the creepy house down the street that everyone is familiar with as a child. "Radley pecans would kill you. A baseball hit into the Radley yard was a lost ball and no questions asked." I particularly love Dill's fascination with it. "In spite of our warnings and explanations it drew him as the moon draws water, but drew him no nearer than the light-pole on the corner, a safe distance from the Radley gate."
I was surprised at how quickly the scissor stabbing incident is mentioned. There is a lot of this that I couldn't remember here in the first third. Which means I performed an amazing display for the teacher. If that was during my homeschooling years...Mom...I'm sorry.
Scout is so amazing as a character. I totally understand why Dill asks her to marry him. When she grows up I imagine men will be falling all over each other for the chance to marry this vibrant, outspoken, "ballsy" woman. Well, I forget that these are qualities I enjoy in women and not all men do. I particularly loved how when Dill, her childhood fiance, starts paying more attention to Jem instead of her she say "I beat him up to twice to remind him, but it did no good".
Her confrontations with Miss Caroline are hilarious. It's funny to see the mentality of "You need to let teachers be the teachers and parents should have nothing to do with your education" back then. This refrain is heard in modern times in Common Core classrooms. A 6 year old who can read? I say more power to her instead of "hold her back, hold her down and force her to unlearn it." She has a particularly trying first day of school and the rest don't fare much better.
"Indeed, they were an endless Project that slowly evolved into a Unit, in which miles of construction paper and wax crayon were expended by the state of Alabama in its well-meaning but fruitless efforts to teach me Group Dynamics".
I do have a faint memory of the treasures found in the knot hole of the tree near the Radley house. That's such a fabulous little detail. I loved how it takes Scout nearly a half hour to be sure, through different child rituals, that the gum wasn't going to poison her. Child is full of these hilarious little rituals and superstitions. Oh, and summer. Do you remember how important summer was? Oh, this book gives me an ache for those times.
"Summer was our best season; it was sleeping on the back screened porch in cots, or trying to sleep in the treehouse; summer was everything good to eat; it was a thousand colors in a parched landscape.."
*sigh* I know it would horribly affect our GDP, but couldn't we just take a national holiday from work for the months of summer? I crave having three months off to do as I please so very much. Well, I guess it would help if I also had someone to cook my food, do my laundry, and take care of me when I fell out of a tree and into a patch of Devil's Club as well.
Uncle Jack reminds me very clearly of my own "Crazy Uncle" Gary.
"We saw Uncle Jack every Christmas, and every Christmas he yelled across the street for Miss Maudie to come marry him. Miss Maudie would yell back, 'Call a little louder, Jack Finch, and they'll hear you at the post office, I haven't heard you yet!' Jem and I thought this a strange way to ask for a lady's hand in marriage, but then Uncle Jack was rather strange."
I swear I've met Miss Maudie while visiting West Virginia the few times that I did.
"True enough, she had an acid tongue in her head, and she did not go about the neighborhood doing good, as Miss Stephanie Crawford. But while no one with a grain of sense trusted Miss Stephanie, Jem and I had considerable faith in Miss Maudie. She never told on us, had never played cat-and-mouse with us, she was not at all interested in our private lives. She was our friend."
There is so much in her to love that recalls our own childhoods...well, at least mine. I grew up in Alaska and was allowed to run free and wild. I wonder what city folk think of the novel. Personally, I've always had the pleasure to be around blue collars and red necks. To me it has been a pleasure to not grow up "citified", though I live there now. I'm fairly certain that they saw me as citified though I was born and bred a military brat. I never saw a reason to despise them, as I saw some do in public schools. I didn't understand what was so bad about being the son of a "Dock Rat" or "Oilfield Trash" or any epithet they put to traditional red necks. Maybe it was because my own mother grew up on a farm, but I thought they were some of the most interesting and noble jobs out there and I still do. It doesn't take much to get me on my soapbox about how everything we own, and everything we put in our mouths was made possible by someone with a blue collar or a red neck. I'll take a farmer over a big city...anything any day. I could get into a few more facets of that, but then I'd never get back to the story.
Two things left that I want to get to and then I have some cleaning to attend to:
1) Harper Lee really knows how to make things at once both creepy and heartwarming. When scout rolls down the hill, slams into the steps of the Radley house and she hears laughter behind the door; depending on your disposition towards Boo that's creepy or heartwarming. Boo stepping out of the house to put a blanket around Scout's shoulders and then disappearing could be either. She nudges it over into creepy territory constantly but holds that line masterfully.
2) I'm admiring how much of the surrounding story is filtering through. She brings up bits and pieces of conversations that Scout remembers but didn't understand at the time. For instance the only time she ever heard Atticus speak tersely with someone was when she heard him tell his sister he was doing the best they can for them. It is so accurate to what childhood is like. Children are around adults all the time and not necessarily paying attention to a full conversation but they do when their parent starts acting emotionally. My own daughter often stores things away that I've forgotten about and a year or so later she'll say, "Oh, that's what you were talking about!" It's a trick I'm going to need to steal from Ms. Lee. :)
Things get serious near the end of this first third. Atticus takes a case for a colored man and is accused of being a "nigger lover" so much so that Scout is driven to defend his honor. Through an odd series of events Atticus is compelled to shoot a mad dog wandering through the town. I'm pretty sure this is a foreshadowing of something coming that will be more than a bit tragic.
Pax,
W
"Call me Ishmael."
"It is a truth universally acknowledged that..."
"When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow."
It doesn't exactly create the sense of "Wait, WHAT? I have to read more!" that all of my writing teachers in college demanded of me. I guess I'm in good company because in my writing I won't force a "perfect hook" first sentence. I'll usually get you by the end of the first chapter though, and that's what these classics have been very good at.
To Kill a Mockingbird takes place in the sleepy little town of Mayberry...sorry, I mean Maycomb. Honestly it may as well be Mayberry it's so delightfully small and idyllic in a retro fashion.
Harper Lee supports her setting with such appropriate usages of language and anecdotes that even my mental reading voice is using a southern drawl. It's so pitch perfect that you don't for a moment question that this town exists nor that it is Ms. Lee's actual experience. One of my favorite things about going back east to visit my relatives in West Virginia is because of language. In fact it is where I first discovered just how delighted I could be by language.
I often relate the story of a time when we visited my Grandaddy and Granny one year. Often the menfolk and womenfolk would separate to talk about things. I was mostly raised by my mother, because my father was in the military and I was homeschooled for a good half of my "learnin'" years, and as such when the separation of the group along gender lines occurred I often hung back with my mother. This allowed me to be privy to all of the good gossip and cooking tips, the later of which set a part of the course for my life.
One year, however, I realized that at some point I had "grown up". I was told, not invited - told, by my father that I was to join the menfolk out on the patio. It was my dad, grandaddy, my crazy uncle Gary, and myself sitting out on the plastic patio furniture on plastic covered cushions. There was an awkward pause as everyone kind of settled in and searched for something to talk about.
Now, talking in the south is not like talking in most places. It's almost a leisure sport. One person, usually the eldest, begins the cycle.
"Went down to the Kroger the other day and got a watermelon they had on special (pronounced spay-shoo) for 99 cents a pound," my grandaddy started it off.
"99 cents a pound?" everyone took a turn saying.
"Yeah. Pretty good for 99 cents a pound," he responded.
The conversation takes another turn towards a secondary topic. A few sentences are said on another topic and then there's another pause before the first topic is folded back into the mix.
"99 cents a pound. Man. I can't imagine it was all that good for 99 cents a pound," my uncle would declare.
"Yeah. Yeah, it was pretty good," Grandaddy reassured.
"And you said you got it on special down at the Kroger?"
"Yeah. 99 cents a pound on special."
A third topic is then brought up, The second topic is then revisited followed by the first.
"Well, I better get on down to the Kroger later to get me some of that watermelon. 99 cents a pound?"
"Yeah, on special. 99 cents a pound. I got it at the Kroger over on that corner down there, but I expect they've got the sale anywhere."
It goes on from there, topic after topic folding back in on themselves til the end of time if you let them, I'm sure. Discovering this delighted me, and now when I'm around groups of people I pay attention to what they are saying it, how they are relating and so on. It delights me to see how these little "conversation fractals work out. Harper Lee's conversations are amazing to watch, from stories about the county's colorful past to Scout's conversations/conflicts with the big city trained teacher.
These stories and word choices give the whole thing an authenticity that can't be fabricated.
"...but they were Haverfords, in Maycomb County a name synonymous with jackass. The Haverfords ahd dispatched Maycomb's leading blacksmith in a misunderstanding arising from the alleged wrongful detention of a mare, were imprudent enough to do it in the presence of three witnesses, and insisted that the son-of-a-bitch-had-it-coming-to-him was a good enough defense for anybody."
Her description of Maycomb is nearly poetry for someone like me,
"Somehow it was hotter then: a black dog suffered on a summer's day; bony mules hitched to Hoover carts flicked flies in the sweltering shad of the live oaks on the square. Men's stiff collars wilted by nine in the morning. Ladies bathed before noon, after their three-o'clock naps, and by nightfall were like soft teacakes with frostings of sweat and sweet talcum."
Talk about some great writing. It evokes a similar mood and poetry as Ray Bradbury in Something Wicked This Way Comes, which is one of the few books I regard highly enough to read every year.
The Radley place is introduced as the creepy house down the street that everyone is familiar with as a child. "Radley pecans would kill you. A baseball hit into the Radley yard was a lost ball and no questions asked." I particularly love Dill's fascination with it. "In spite of our warnings and explanations it drew him as the moon draws water, but drew him no nearer than the light-pole on the corner, a safe distance from the Radley gate."
I was surprised at how quickly the scissor stabbing incident is mentioned. There is a lot of this that I couldn't remember here in the first third. Which means I performed an amazing display for the teacher. If that was during my homeschooling years...Mom...I'm sorry.
Scout is so amazing as a character. I totally understand why Dill asks her to marry him. When she grows up I imagine men will be falling all over each other for the chance to marry this vibrant, outspoken, "ballsy" woman. Well, I forget that these are qualities I enjoy in women and not all men do. I particularly loved how when Dill, her childhood fiance, starts paying more attention to Jem instead of her she say "I beat him up to twice to remind him, but it did no good".
Her confrontations with Miss Caroline are hilarious. It's funny to see the mentality of "You need to let teachers be the teachers and parents should have nothing to do with your education" back then. This refrain is heard in modern times in Common Core classrooms. A 6 year old who can read? I say more power to her instead of "hold her back, hold her down and force her to unlearn it." She has a particularly trying first day of school and the rest don't fare much better.
"Indeed, they were an endless Project that slowly evolved into a Unit, in which miles of construction paper and wax crayon were expended by the state of Alabama in its well-meaning but fruitless efforts to teach me Group Dynamics".
I do have a faint memory of the treasures found in the knot hole of the tree near the Radley house. That's such a fabulous little detail. I loved how it takes Scout nearly a half hour to be sure, through different child rituals, that the gum wasn't going to poison her. Child is full of these hilarious little rituals and superstitions. Oh, and summer. Do you remember how important summer was? Oh, this book gives me an ache for those times.
"Summer was our best season; it was sleeping on the back screened porch in cots, or trying to sleep in the treehouse; summer was everything good to eat; it was a thousand colors in a parched landscape.."
*sigh* I know it would horribly affect our GDP, but couldn't we just take a national holiday from work for the months of summer? I crave having three months off to do as I please so very much. Well, I guess it would help if I also had someone to cook my food, do my laundry, and take care of me when I fell out of a tree and into a patch of Devil's Club as well.
Uncle Jack reminds me very clearly of my own "Crazy Uncle" Gary.
"We saw Uncle Jack every Christmas, and every Christmas he yelled across the street for Miss Maudie to come marry him. Miss Maudie would yell back, 'Call a little louder, Jack Finch, and they'll hear you at the post office, I haven't heard you yet!' Jem and I thought this a strange way to ask for a lady's hand in marriage, but then Uncle Jack was rather strange."
I swear I've met Miss Maudie while visiting West Virginia the few times that I did.
"True enough, she had an acid tongue in her head, and she did not go about the neighborhood doing good, as Miss Stephanie Crawford. But while no one with a grain of sense trusted Miss Stephanie, Jem and I had considerable faith in Miss Maudie. She never told on us, had never played cat-and-mouse with us, she was not at all interested in our private lives. She was our friend."
There is so much in her to love that recalls our own childhoods...well, at least mine. I grew up in Alaska and was allowed to run free and wild. I wonder what city folk think of the novel. Personally, I've always had the pleasure to be around blue collars and red necks. To me it has been a pleasure to not grow up "citified", though I live there now. I'm fairly certain that they saw me as citified though I was born and bred a military brat. I never saw a reason to despise them, as I saw some do in public schools. I didn't understand what was so bad about being the son of a "Dock Rat" or "Oilfield Trash" or any epithet they put to traditional red necks. Maybe it was because my own mother grew up on a farm, but I thought they were some of the most interesting and noble jobs out there and I still do. It doesn't take much to get me on my soapbox about how everything we own, and everything we put in our mouths was made possible by someone with a blue collar or a red neck. I'll take a farmer over a big city...anything any day. I could get into a few more facets of that, but then I'd never get back to the story.
Two things left that I want to get to and then I have some cleaning to attend to:
1) Harper Lee really knows how to make things at once both creepy and heartwarming. When scout rolls down the hill, slams into the steps of the Radley house and she hears laughter behind the door; depending on your disposition towards Boo that's creepy or heartwarming. Boo stepping out of the house to put a blanket around Scout's shoulders and then disappearing could be either. She nudges it over into creepy territory constantly but holds that line masterfully.
2) I'm admiring how much of the surrounding story is filtering through. She brings up bits and pieces of conversations that Scout remembers but didn't understand at the time. For instance the only time she ever heard Atticus speak tersely with someone was when she heard him tell his sister he was doing the best they can for them. It is so accurate to what childhood is like. Children are around adults all the time and not necessarily paying attention to a full conversation but they do when their parent starts acting emotionally. My own daughter often stores things away that I've forgotten about and a year or so later she'll say, "Oh, that's what you were talking about!" It's a trick I'm going to need to steal from Ms. Lee. :)
Things get serious near the end of this first third. Atticus takes a case for a colored man and is accused of being a "nigger lover" so much so that Scout is driven to defend his honor. Through an odd series of events Atticus is compelled to shoot a mad dog wandering through the town. I'm pretty sure this is a foreshadowing of something coming that will be more than a bit tragic.
Pax,
W
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